Quiet Reading, as always, thanks.
Journal #14 - Have you ever experience bullying?
What happened? What did you do? What did you feel about it?
Have you ever been on the other side of it? Explain that too.
Your Paragraphs are Suffering:
Here are the Fixes
Decide on the topic - the entire paragraph MUST be on that topic
KISS is the best band in the world - >
Your topic sentence MUST give that topic and that theme for the whole paragraph - EVERY SENTENCE AFTER WILL BE ABOUT THAT
Your body sentence will all be reasons why, or examples why, or telling why the topic sentence IS.
Your body sentences MUST have examples or explanations - you need specifics.
The pattern is this X is the topic sentence and now Y, Z, Z1 are the proofs.
You need to conclude this paragraph by RESTATING YOUR TOPIC.
Topic
Proof 1
Proof 2
Proof 3
Conclusion
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