What up today?
Quiet Reading, as always
No journal today
Clean up work - redoing all work from the marked work handed back
New Business:
How do I support my topic sentence?
What actually goes in the body of a paragraph?
Teen and dog business is similar
Body Paragraph - something that proves this correct that comes from the article
First Step - find the proof as a quotation or reference
Second Step - compare what is in the story with what you KNOW
Third Step - you need to jot down the point that PROVES your topic sentence and INCLUDES the reference to the story
I think that the business of marketing stuff to dogs is similar to marketing stuff to teenagers.
Dogs like Jim get birthday parties and in Jim’s case, a cupcake, which he doesn’t need.
Teenagers are also sold things that they don’t need, and so are their parents. Think of the difference between name brands and store brands for clothes. There is no real difference. Teens don’t need high fashion.
Rewrite the above elements into your own paragraph for Q9 on page 5 and resub this in place of the mark that you had there. If your mark was good, then it will be a BONUS mark.
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